
There are certain summer mornings when the rain drifts
sideways, almost a mist, and all is doused
in a wash of silvers and greys: colours from a palette
of pebble and lichen, herring gull and trout.
Sun hats are thrown aside
in favour of anoraks. Plans
are revised. Do we miss the sun?
The primary blue, the glare?
Well, yes. But the air is fresh and sweet and raindrops cling
to wires and glistening leaves. Snails will inch
out from the hedges shining, while we just drift
idly: from breakfast … to morning coffee … to lunch.
(A poem from 2010. But I reproduce it here at the end of a remarkably wet August in England!)
This morning was exactly such a morning here. A beautiful piece that perfectly reflects the peace of a day. Well done!
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By: ebbtide on 31 August, 2020
at 20:11
Thank you Sarah … so you had just this kind of morning too!
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By: John Looker on 31 August, 2020
at 22:23
Beautiful lyric, John. Just beautiful.
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By: Thomas Davis on 31 August, 2020
at 20:31
Hello again Tom. Thank you.
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By: John Looker on 31 August, 2020
at 22:24
Thanks John, your words describe our August only ours is moldy, soggy, and weeds growing faster than we can beat them back. Enjoy the journey.
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By: Anonymous on 1 September, 2020
at 09:56
Not anonymous, click before I filled in info, cheers ~ Don H
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By: Donald Harbour on 1 September, 2020
at 09:59
It’s good to hear from you Don. Thanks. What strange weather you describe!
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By: John Looker on 1 September, 2020
at 22:55
Love your poem, John. A beautiful write about nature for which I have a strong passion. Be well.
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By: Renee Espriu on 2 September, 2020
at 03:11
Thank you Renee, it’s good to hear that the poem works for you.
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By: John Looker on 2 September, 2020
at 07:44
I love this one, especially the palette of colours. Although, we’ve just had a little bit more rain than you describe here on our walking holiday in Snowdonia…..
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By: The Cheesesellers Wife on 2 September, 2020
at 20:53
Hi John, ‘Summer Rain’ is a cracking poem and I’ve much enjoyed it.
It can be a pain, the rain, sure; a spoiler of plans, yes. But sheltering beneath an umbrella or porch, I love it! Those gurgling gullies; beaded, bejewelled raindrops; and the smell of it kissing earth.
Nice when the sun comes out though!
Cheers,
Paul
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By: Paul Beech on 4 September, 2020
at 10:45
Hi Paul. Thank you, it’s good to hear from you and yes you’ve caught the spirit of such a day exactly! All the best, John
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By: John Looker on 4 September, 2020
at 11:50
A thoroughly enjoyable poem, John. Such lovely images!
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By: Betty Hayes Albright on 10 September, 2020
at 22:25
Thank you Betty!
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By: John Looker on 10 September, 2020
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