Where The Lost Things Are
At the back of the west wind,
where the evening sun wakens a bird-rich isle:
that’s where the lost things are.
Where the hummingbird
quivers at a trumpet dripping with nectar
and clouds of scent rise over a turquoise sea,
that’s where they are, the things that can’t be found.
The golden sovereign that slipped between
the boards in the Tudor Hall; the Hall itself lost at cards
in Venice on the long Grand Tour;
they’re here; this is the spot.
Even the daughter, forswearing carriages and
pianoforte, who was carried away in steam and smoke
for love; and the son gone surfing in foreign lands;
they too are here. They all come here.
And therefore you.
You’ve raced across the foot-burning sand
to float like a starfish in the clear lagoon,
your tequila-on-ice waiting you back in the shade.
If only mine were too.
If only I were too.
Β© John Stevens 2014
(Written as an unsuccessful competition entry, on a pre-set theme.)
I feel like I just read an old tale from a culture that I’m not familiar with — curious but enchanting. Lovely work. =)
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By: redgladiola on 16 July, 2014
at 15:24
Thank you! And thank you for browsing too.
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By: John Stevens on 16 July, 2014
at 17:45
Such a mysterious poem π Is it this hall? http://henhampark.com/henham-hall Lovely π
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By: Ina on 16 July, 2014
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Not necessarily, but it could be couldn’t it? You know Britain extremely well Ina!
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By: John Stevens on 16 July, 2014
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I googled some key words π
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By: Ina on 16 July, 2014
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I prefer to believe you are extremely knowledgeable!
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By: John Stevens on 16 July, 2014
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Most knowledge comes from knowing how to use google search lol π
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By: Ina on 17 July, 2014
at 04:56
Beautiful. I love the final two lines. Shared on FB. π
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By: Bennison Books on 16 July, 2014
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Thank you – I’m delighted!
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By: John Stevens on 17 July, 2014
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I find this a very moving poem, John, and will most likely want to say more, once I’ve continued to re-read and ponder awhile.
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By: Cynthia Jobin on 16 July, 2014
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I really couldn’t tell how this one would strike you, so I’d say I was relieved Cynthia; thank you.
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By: John Stevens on 17 July, 2014
at 21:47
Sounds very inviting — I’d like to lose myself there for awhile. π
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By: Christine Goodnough on 17 July, 2014
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It’s better there than here I guess!
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By: John Stevens on 17 July, 2014
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It’s successful if you ask me. Like watching a beautifully shot 45 second movie
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By: Frederick E. Whitehead on 17 July, 2014
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Thanks Fred – I’d like to believe that were true!
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By: John Stevens on 17 July, 2014
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It leaves me feeling both awe (for it seems like a good place to go, to be) and deep sorrow. Awe for that place and sorrow for the one left out of it. There is a dreamy feel to this poem and a yearning, perhaps, to find what is gone, what is lost forever.
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By: Anna Mark on 17 July, 2014
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I’m pleased if it struck you that way Anna; thank you.
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By: John Stevens on 17 July, 2014
at 17:38
Lovely old song, reminds me of one of my childhood ‘s favorites, Yeats’ Celtic Twilight.
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By: Tom D'Evelyn on 17 July, 2014
at 12:30
I’m going to have to check that out Tom. It’s not in my copy of Yeats. Thanks.
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By: John Stevens on 17 July, 2014
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Rather nice, John. I was drawn in by the whimsy, then unexpectedly touched.
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By: sweettenorbull on 20 July, 2014
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Thank you β I’m relieved that you weren’t deterred by the whimsy. I might have been myself!
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By: John Stevens on 21 July, 2014
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Reblogged this on Bonnie McClellan's Weblog and commented:
A poem that’s just right for summer from IPM contributor John Stevens:
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By: bonniemcclellan on 21 July, 2014
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Hello Bonnie β how very kind of you!
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By: John Stevens on 21 July, 2014
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Some of these images, I’m guessing, are quite particular to your own family history, and others like Tudor Hall and the game of cards more general; but they’re all about absence, distance, loss, missing (as in “I miss you.”). At the same time, almost oxymoronically, there is a place—“this is the spot”—where it all comes home, to sadness, wish, longing. You often take us travelling, and the cadence of this journey is, as usual, impeccable; the arrival is not only pensive, but, to me, astonishing. In plainer words, I really like this poem, John
P.S. Did you know there is also a Tudor Hall historic house in our state of Maryland….once owned and occupied by the Booth family, their John Wilkes Booth being the man who assassinated President Abraham Lincoln.
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By: Cynthia Jobin on 22 July, 2014
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I wasn’t sure if this one would work. It was a bit more fanciful and sentimental than I generally feel comfortable with, so I feel greatly reassured that you, in particular Cynthia, and a number of others, have decided it’s okay. The incidents are not, as it happens, drawn from family life here. I invented them to produce a journey in types of loss, plus a parallel journey over 4 or 5 centuries. But that’s my personal angle. The test is whether the verses work for others and β phew! β they seem to do so for some. Thank you for coming back to tell me.
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By: John Stevens on 22 July, 2014
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A wonderful poem, John – every image, each detail, the emotions it invokes. I MUST get caught up here…!
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By: Betty Hayes Albright on 31 July, 2014
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Hello Betty β thank you. There’s no ‘must’ of course!
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By: John Stevens on 31 July, 2014
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Reblogged this on From guestwriters.
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